Nearly fell asleep.
Well, this one was pretty well thought out and everything, it just wasnt too entertaining. The voices were a bit unclear, but that's the only flaw I see in the actual flash itself.
But the lack of plot, and anything happening in particular was a huge absense, and a big blow to your final score.
Though, this type of flash was original (style points), and the artwork was well above-average, the lack of anything remotely interesting must be painful to you.
I flipped through the reviews and saw that others thought differently, it's just my opinion. Sorry bud.